Constructive: Try to find another word instead of using “kind of.” For example instead say, In Walker Percy’s work of “The Loss of the Creature,” he explains that in order to increase learning one must put themselves in someone else shoes. Kind of sounds unsure.
Praise: I really like this sub point, study groups is a wonderful way for students to experience transformative learning outside the classroom.
Percy: I think that there may be another quote from Percy that can connect to students daily reflection. I believe this quote has more to do with the educator than the students planning their days out.
