Group: Donny Lessing, Tj Fitzpatrick, Nick Gamba
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fPg3Ktpgt8BJKYqn7h_3egK2Tz-TYcFqAa8hZG3a_yQ/edit?usp=sharing
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WRT120 F2019 Prof Randall Cream
Group: Donny Lessing, Tj Fitzpatrick, Nick Gamba
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1fPg3Ktpgt8BJKYqn7h_3egK2Tz-TYcFqAa8hZG3a_yQ/edit?usp=sharing
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Praise: Your opening sentences were strong and well written. They also give a good foundation of what your essay is going to be about.
Constructive: Towards the middle and end of the paragraph it seems to get a little bit repetitive, with the word choice and ideas you are explaining.
Percy: You have a good amount of quotes, most if not all of them I can see tying into your essay based off the opening paragraph.