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Positive: great start
Negative: Thesis is long
Great job incorporating Percy
postive- very good at getting to the point
negative- more in depth with quotes
good use of Percy
Percy: Great job using Percy in your topic sentence!
Positive: strong thesis!
Negative: Explain quotes a little bit more
I think you have really good ideas and I think they work really well in you essay.
Your thesis might be a little wordy.
I like the quotes you chose from Percy and I think they explain your ideas really well.