Topic: 2
Team: Myself
Thesis: Freire’s idea in “The Banking Concept of Education” is that teachers do not produce students learning, but can occur when students take action in order to make their own learning success by their own. Most of the students at WCU have the power to control and make their own choices, the job as a student is to develop those choices in to society in order to have success in their own learning.
Quote 1: “ Education as the practice of freedom- as opposed of education as the practice of domination- denies that man is abstract, isolated independent and attaches to the world; but it also denies that the world exists as a reality apart from people” (Freire’s pg 4)
Quote 2: “The world- no longer something to be described with deceptive words- becomes the object of that transforming action by men and women which results in their humanization.” ( Freire’s pg 6)
Peer review for Juliana
Lauren Beccaria: I think the grammatical errors in the thesis are taking away from the clearness of your topic. There is potential in your idea and spreading your own ideas to society to help yourself; however, I think the wording is confusing.
Sami Kakar: I agree with Lauren with the grammatical errors are taking away from your main point. Your ideas are forming and you’re going towards the right path. I would suggest clearing up your thesis a little and be a little more specific to what you’re going to be writing about
Jeff Biancaniello: I agree with them about the grammatical errors they could make your topic more clear. The idea is there I think the wording could get changed a little. The word choice could make it more clear and make the thesis better.