Jenna and Kenzie
Constructive: I feel two of your topics blend together. Gaining interpersonal skills and critical thinking skills should be merged as one topic since they both create skills needed for the workforce. Gaining interpersonal skills is your weakest solution so combining it with critical thinking would make it stronger.
Praise: Your thesis is very clear, concise, and strong. The quote used for critical thinking I think can be strongly used to aid how classes outside your major will benefit one to develop skills one will use in their profession.
Percy: Your use of Percy is very strong and aligns well with each way to seek education beyond the major; however, I would look to expand more on Percy’s ideas to emphasize how these classes outside one’s major is essential for their success for their future career.
